Definition
Deep POV is third-person narration written so close to a character that the line between narrator and character nearly disappears. Perception, judgment, and vocabulary feel like the character's own, without filter words such as "she thought" or "he noticed."
Example
The hallway smelled of bleach and old carpet, exactly like the hospital she had promised never to enter again reads from inside the character's experience, not from a distant storyteller.
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Common mistakes
- Keeping filter phrases like "she saw" and "he felt" that pull the reader out of deep POV.
- Letting the narrator's polished language replace the character's natural way of thinking.